Partial People- Part 1

When the world finally Ended, everyone signed with relief. The events leading to it spanned decades of fear and tension and growing hysteria as worse case scenarios were followed by even worser scenarios. When the world ended, it put a stop to the endless fear and tensions. Nothing more could happen: we unlocked the most terrible achievement, and a few of us were still alive. Not that we wanted to be.

We were left as partial people, damaged and barely functioning. Our planet was scared and destroyed, only the scraggliest remnants of hybrid plants managed to grow on the crust, only the fiercest experimental animals survived what we had done. Clean water does not exist anymore, the air is not really breathable, but we eat the mutant plants and animals, drink the oily water, and cough the putrid air because there is nothing left for us.

Years and years ago, some rich CEO tried to evacuate the planet. We needed a fresh start, she said, a place where we could rebuild the Earth from without dying. Some people said we didn’t deserve to start over, that we shouldn’t be allowed onto another world until we repaired the effects of our sins on this one. I wasn’t sure who I agreed with: I wanted to live, but I did not think I deserved to, as a member of the most destructive species. In the end, it didn’t matter because a high-ranking official somewhere made the choice for us. The evacuation program was scrapped, the CEO disappeared, the people fell silent. We stayed on Earth and we burned with her.

Chemical debris from the bombs infects us all, and before the End, the UN was trying to help the chemical infections become the ‘Next Step in Human Evolution’, or something like that. That’s where I was, when it all stopped. In a cave, in a box, surrounded by technicians in ratty lab coats and soldiers with atomic pistols, waiting for whatever would happen next.  When the end came, they all just walked away and left me, still locked up.

I waited for two days, because I had nothing better to do and I didn’t feel like putting in the effort to leave. Eventually I did. I put my hand to the crack in the door and stopped focusing on holding my position. That’s all it took, a little relaxing of the muscles and suddenly I didn’t have muscles, or skin or bones or anything else you expect a living creature to have. I became sentient water, because that is what the End did to me: made me a compilation of two elements. I oozed out of the box, leaving my jumpsuit and underthings behind. I reformed on the other side of the box, struggling to pull myself back into human-ish shape. That’s what they call contaminants like me: human-ish. As I finished pulling my left arm into being, I heard a low whistle behind me.

A/n: I’m alive! I finished my undergrad degree and I want to work more seriously on my writing. This is a several part story that I am going to work on and update as I go. What do you think so far?

Cass & Pent

            The moving van pulls up promptly at 2pm. Cass sees it from the register, and even though she has been waiting for it, she still cringes. After 92 years of Hammond & Hammond Shoes, the store has been sold. Cass, her mother, her grandmother, and her great aunt, must move out of the small apartment above the store where she and all the other Hammonds have lived since Great-Grandma Hammond first opened the store. The store had been run by woman to woman, mother to daughter, without any husbands to speak of. Cass’s mother lives in hope that Cass would find a nice young man to settle and keep, but Cass doubts it: her heart is still shattered and she doesn’t have it in her to try again.

            Out of the moving van cab steps a huge woman, easily six feet tall and all curves and muscles. Cass stares as the woman adjusts her company cap and fishes in the cab for a clipboard.

            “Ahem,” says the customer trying to pay.

            Cass snaps back to herself. “Sorry,” she says. “Here you go: receipt in the bag?”

            As the customer leaves, the moving woman steps inside, followed by a scrawny young man trying and failing to grow facial hair. The woman comes up to Cass, smiling just a little, and Cass feels her heart thump harder. This woman is beautiful, with the greenest eyes Cass has ever seen, and a gorgeous bronze completion. She is a towering Greek goddess, and Cass again forgets to stay in the present.

            “I’m Cass,” she blurts, somehow losing all social skills. She can feel her face heating up.

            “Hi,” the woman smiles, “I’m Pent, and this is Jason, we’re with J & R Moving?”

            “Right,” Cass tries to focus. “We’re just moving the stuff upstairs.” Cass glances around to make sure there are no other customers in the store: it is a Wednesday, and they are predictably slow. She gestures to Pent. “Follow me, it’s up this way.” As Cass turns to lead them through the shelves of shoes to the back of the building, she is acutely aware of how she is walking, and because she is thinking about Pent watching her from behind, Cass trips on nothing and lands on her face.

            “Oh god, are you okay?” Pent sounds genuinely concerned as she bends over Cass to help her up.

            “Um, yes, I’m good.” Cass has turned an inhuman shade of red an is acutely aware of Pent’s nearness. She stands up, not letting Pent help her. “Sorry, I’m a klutz.”

            “Yeah, you are,” Jason laughs at her unkindly and Cass wishes the ground would swallow her up.

            “Here,” Pent shoves a clipboard to Jason. “Go start the evaluation.” Her voice is cold and dismissive, and Jason doesn’t answer her. Instead, he takes the clipboard continues to the back of the store.

            “Ignore him,” Pent says. “He’s insecure because I beat him at thumb war like, thirty times this morning.” Cass laughs. “That’s better. Are you really okay though? That was the most dramatic fall I’ve ever seen.”

            “Yeah, I’m alright, I think my dignity might even recover someday.” Pent laughs and Cass feels something in her try to unfurl at the sound, the part of her that wants to love and be loved, the part of her that shattered when he left her. Cass shoves it down to keep herself safe and turns to head back the register at the front of the store. “I’ll let you get back to work,” she says.

            Pent looks a little thrown. “Ah, okay.” Pent heads after Jason, but halfway, she spins around and dashes back over to Cass. “See, here’s the thing: I have two tickets to see this concert, but I can’t find anyone who wants to spend their Sunday night listening to newgrass music with me,” Pent rushes. “What I mean is, do you want to go out with me?”

            Cass winces a little. “I don’t think that’s such a great idea,” she says, not looking at Pent. The second it leaves her mouth, she hates herself for it.

            “Oh, right.” Pent shuffles a little. “Well, I guess I’ll go help Jason.”

            Cass spends the rest of the day mindlessly marking down prices and helping what few customers came to shop. The whole time she berates herself. Why did I say that to Pent? I want to hang out with her! Finally, after closing time, she slowly hauls herself upstairs. The living room is a labyrinth of boxes, packed and labelled. Pent is nowhere to be seen, but Cass can hear her and Jason in the bedrooms, working industriously. Slowly, Cass heads towards them.

            She finds Pent in her mom’s room, wrapping fragile knick-knacks in bubble wrap. “Hi, Pent.”

            “Oh hey,” Pent looks at her and seems to forget what to do with her hands. “Listen, I’m sorry-“

            “About before,” Cass starts. They both stop and Cass says nervously “I just wanted to say I’d really like to go out with you. To listen to the newgrass concert, although I have no idea what it is. I went through a rough break up a year ago, and I guess I’m still a little scared. But I really want to go if the offer still stands?”

            “Of course the offer still stands,” Pent deflates with relief, “I thought you were gonna say I wasn’t your type or something. It would have made this whole job so much worse.”

            “Well,” Cass can feel her face going red, “Give me your number and I can help make it more interesting, at least.”

            Pent laughs. And gives her the number.

I wrote this story for the 2021 NYC Midnight Flash Fiction challenge. My prompt was Romantic Comedy in a shoe store with a moving van. It was hard to write and I am proud of it, even with it’s flaws.