A History of the Udian War~ Part 2

When I was small, I found a dilapidated tannery (still working) that had a crumbing side in the alley that one could climb up if you were motivated enough to get off the street. The roof is flat, and over the years I had managed to build an almost snug shelter up there. As I found more Muffins, I had added onto the structure, and now it is a beggar’s version of a rabbit warren. The tannery keeps it warm (and smelly, but I could live with that), it is easily defendable from other rooftoppers, and it is hidden from below. Basically, it was perfect. Unless you had to get up there with a big-ass adult. Who was unconscious. And you had a bad leg. Yup.

Almost to the wall, I find a strip of fabric almost two feet long. The stranger is already half tied on, so I used the cloth to tie his legs so I can let go of him. Experimentally, I swing from side to side and almost fall over when my left knee buckles under the weight. I catch myself on the wall and decided there is nothing for it but to start climbing.

I would never admit this to Tiph, but just between you and me, I almost don’t make it. The climb is long enough that I need all four limbs to get myself up, but with the added weight of the stranger, I get halfway and think I am going to fall. I grit my teeth and keep climbing, focusing on just one more handhold, one more step with my gimp leg, one more handhold… and then the stranger shifts. “Motherffff-“ I am shaking from the strain and I glance up to see how close I am. Three more feet and I will be at the roof. I summon any strength I have left and drag us to the top by shear will power. As I make it over the edge, I feel something in my knee pop and the pain is instant and excruciating. I flop down (that’s all I can do) and struggle to untie the stranger. He is moaning and moving when I finally get him untied and let him plop gently onto the floor next to me. I sit there, trying to breathe and not throw up as I wait for the pain in my knee to subside. It doesn’t. Shit. I give myself five minutes, then I make myself move over to check on the stranger. He has stopped moving and moaning, which is probably bad, but it gives me another minute. The cut on his head isn’t deep, but it looks like he has been hit pretty hard, and it looks infected.

I glance around and was considering my options when I see Bunny, the newest and youngest Muffin, watching me wide-eyed. She is maybe three? I don’t know yet. She’s only been with us for two months and hasn’t said anything yet, just stared at us all while clutching a stuffed rabbit (hence ‘Bunny’ until she can pick her name).

“Hey Bunny,” I say, doing a great job at sounding like this is not an emergency. (I’m serious, I sounded very chill!) “Do you know where my robot leg is?” My robot leg is an outdated and poorly sized metal brace that I am supposed to wear around my left leg to help bear my weight. She nods. “Can you bring it to me?” She turns back to the shelter without saying anything, which I choose to interpret as a yes. A few minutes later, she comes back, dragging it behind her.

I wince as I move my leg to put it on. It’s a barbaric device: it is a metal scaffold that encases most of my leg. It has a bar that goes under my foot and two straps that need to be tightened painfully around my thigh, but with it, I can walk without putting any weight on my knee, which is what I need right now.

After I’ve got myself strapped in, I stand up and grab the stranger under the armpits. I lift him as much as I can and drag him the rest of the way into the shelter. I glance around as I go, looking for Bunny, but she has vanished. In fact, the shelter, which is usually full of Muffins, is deserted, silent, and none of the lights are lit. I should be worried about it, but with the stranger and with my knee, I don’t give it more than a passing thought. I maneuver the stranger over to the sleeping corner, the warmest and most cushioned spot we have. I lay the stranger down and turn to get the lights on.

I light the structure and see Bunny clutching the ratty bag I keep our med supplies in. “Thank you, Bunny,” I say as she hands it to me. “Do you mind helping?” she nods and carefully puts her doll down and crouches with me over the stranger’s head. He is young, a year or two older than me, but in really good health for the lower districts. His skin is dark, and his hair is red, he is tall and muscled: he doesn’t look like he is even from the upper districts. I begin to think he is not from the City at all.

There are people outside the walls. Everyone knows it, but the City is sealed off and no one speaks of what is outside. We know there are people out there, because that is where the Spoiled are sent, presumably, but I think everyone assumes the people out there are a sort of mindless, living dead group, incapable of trying to get back into the City. I know a little bit more, though.

I know that the people outside are healthier than us, but I also know you need to be strong to survive out there. I know your chances of surviving outside the walls as a spoiled are slim to none. I know that sometimes, for reasons I cannot fathom, the people on the outside want to come in.  I am fairly sure the stranger is one of the Outsiders.

I examine the stranger’s wound while Bunny careful cleans it. It’s illegal for anyone except a MedKinght to treat the injured or sick, but down here in the lower districts, it’s a matter of survival to learn. He must’ve been hurt only a few days ago, but there is a bad smell and puss coming from it. I look in the med bag for inspiration, but there is nothing to save him from dying in a few days. I could try to steal something from the Upper District, but I am not even sure if what I need exists. It’s okay, though, I have another trick I can use.

For as long as I remember, if I concentrate, I can feel the life energy in the people around me. I can feel everything that is wrong with them, like dark spots in their energy. If I focus, and if I know how they are supposed to go back together, I can pull out the dark spots and pull their energy back into what it is supposed to be. I can’t do it for everything: when I tried to remove the Spoiling from a Muffin, I passed out for eight days and had a raging headache for over a month. It was so bad I couldn’t see straight. That was the last time I tried to cure something that big. I have never met anyone else who can heal people, although I can’t exactly go around asking “Hey, can you illegally heal people? No? Just me then.”

Right. As Bunny finished washing the stranger’s head, I close my eyes and concentrate. Threads of pulsing blue light weave and tangle together to create the stranger, and there, at his head, is a dark know to be untied. I frown, double checking, but I was right about the stranger being from outside the walls: he doesn’t have any Spoiling at all. Mentally, I reach out and untangle the knot, tugging loose the rotting thread that is the infection. I can feel the wound sealing up, and I hear Bunny gasp a little. I smile, but I keep my eyes closed.

I have dark brown eyes, but when I pull my little trick, they turn the bluest blue and stay like that for a little bit afterwards. When I think my eyes have returned to normal, I look at Bunny. She is excited and gesturing for me to look and the stranger’s perfectly healed head. He doesn’t even have a scar. “Pretty cool, isn’t it, Bunny? You have to keep it a secret though, okay? You can only tell the Muffins.” She nods seriously.

I look back at the stranger, now sleeping. He’ll wake up soon, and I need to tie him up in case he is less than appreciative. I gather some ropes, then hear a small voice behind me. “Um, Derick?” I whip around, and it’s Bunny. “I’m Betty,” she says.

I grin. “Good to meet you, Betty.”

A/n: My writing style will inevitably shift and change as the story goes, since I am still writing it. Please be patient: Once the story is complete, I will edit it to be more cohesive. What do you think so far?

A History of the Udian War~ Part 1

“Tell me a story.”

“I don’t know any stories.”

“Everyone knows at least one story: tell me about yourself.”

“My story is depressing and you already know it.”

“I don’t know all of it. In fact, I’ll bet I know less than a fraction.”

“…”

“Come on, you said you trust me: tell me your story.”

“Alright, but it’s long. Don’t say I didn’t warn you.”

“… Well?”

“I- don’t know where to start.”

“Tell me about the City.

“You’ve seen it, you know about it already.”

“Not like you’ve seen it. Tell me the things only you know, tell me what you hate and what you love, tell me about your city.”

“…”

“Please?”

“The city is built on the skeleton of an ancient place with towering structures, according to the legends. It’s an island, but we (the people who live there) aren’t supposed to know that. There are hundreds of tunnels and passageways flooded with water, so most people must have guessed. There is  a huge wall around the city, and none of the ruined buildings are tall enough to see over them. Stories float around speculating what is out there, but only a few of us know. And we only know because we…. Anyway.

Sometime 70ish years ago, the thing happened. Countries everywhere were at war, millions and billions of people just fighting nonstop, and then a group of (supposedly) intelligent people fired 12 weapons to temporarily drug all those people into sleeping, just to stop the fighting. Except it didn’t work and instead we got a global poisoning. Everyone had it, still has it in the City, but it was worse then. Do you know how it works?

We call it the Spoiling, the diseases we all breathe that rots you from the inside out, like spoiled fruit. After years and years, it gets to your brain, and you become a spreader, even more contagious than the air. You stumble around from the pain, carrying the Spoiling to everyone near you, and when other people get it from you, it takes hold of their brains faster too. When the Spoiling was new, all those years ago, it spread to people’s brains in a matter of days. No one knew what it was, but they figured out that contact with the Spoiled spread it even faster, so they built the wall around the city to keep to keep people safe, to separate the ones who are too far gone from the rest of us. It sort of works. Because of the wall, though, there is no wind and the air is dark with pollution. It is always a dusky red in the City.

They have air filtration now, for the rich and important, and the MedKnights can treat your symptoms if you can pay. For the rest of us poor idiots, though, we breathe the Spoiling and count our years. Every Spring there is a mandatory inspection, when the Knights check every City inhabitant to see if we are too infectious yet. There is a mark they put on your right hand if you fail the inspection, and then they throw you out of the City. Or kill you, I guess. They could just be killing them.

Right, so in the City, you have your failing health, and also no food. I don’t know how food gets to the City, but I know it is never enough. People pay a stupid amount to get real food, and the poorer of us just take pills that technically nourish you, but we still look gaunt. If you have no money, which is true for a lot of us, you steal pills and then grind them into dust, taking a little at a time to make them last longer. Everyone is constantly stealing or being mugged, at least in the lower city. Any sign of weakness and ten or more people will try and get your food pills. It’s a hard place to live.”

*

I rush through the main thoroughfare, looking like I have someplace to be. I don’t have someplace to be, but it would be weird if I was here without a destination. This road is empty of shops, homes, or rest points. It’s only features are turnings to other, smaller ways that lead to even smaller ways that eventually become populated with reasonable places to stop and linger. The thoroughfare is designed to help you get to your destination as quickly as possible, and it is filled with people on their way to and from Somewhere Important so I have to look like that to blend in. Blending in is really important to my survival.

That’s not quiet true. I am one of the Soiled, people who are slowly being overcome by the long-term effects of living in this shitty world without access to frequent medical assistance. That’s not quiet true either. Some people have a ridiculously strong immune system and are able to stay clean without medical help, but they are few and far between; a lot fewer and rarer than NatMed wants us to believe. They want us to believe that humanity is evolving, developing a natural immunity to all the toxins in the air. Ha.

Medical assistance is expensive, and only the people who genuinely have Somewhere Important to be can afford the required assistance, plus the air filtration systems (they don’t actually clean everything out of the air, but they clean enough that they can slow the Spoiling by 80%) to have a relatively natural life. Whatever that means.

I do not have any money, nor do I have Somewhere Important to get to, so what am I doing on the main thoroughfare, you ask? Procuring money. Or food. Or a coat. Whatever I can get. People are in such a rush here, you can get crushed trying to pick something up after you’ve dropped it, so most people just curse their loss and keep going. After all, they can replace whatever it was. I move through the crowd, causing people to drop what they are carrying. An elbow here, a sudden swerve here. I don’t pick it up: I’m not suicidal, I’m trying to survive, remember? About 40 steps behind me, though, a loose group of kids follow my dodges and shuffles and hopefully manage to grab what I’ve dropped without too many injuries. I don’t here any shouting or complaining (they are verbal when hurt) so I assume it is going well.

I call them the Scragamuffins, like ragamuffins except scragglier than that. I’m a horrible person, I know. It started out as just me poking fun at them for my own amusement, but then they started calling themselves that, and now they have this strange sense of identity as my Scragamuffins. I should probably have seen it coming. There are eight of them, all orphans, most of them too young to help. Tiph, Nige, and Raspy are the three oldest at 13, 12, and 12, so they are the ones backing me up today. They are insufferable little brats, but they may as well help me feed the others.

We have been collecting things for almost three hours, and it is nearly time to stop. If we keep going any longer, the security people are likely to notice via the cameras they use to watch the thoroughfare. I begin to make my way to the nearest side shoot and trust that the Muffins will follow me. They do. 20 minutes later, they reach me and we all walk away from the thoroughfare without speaking. There are microphones in more locations than there are cameras, so we defer any discussion until we get to the rattier parts of the city. Which might take a minute. Our endeavors have brought us almost to the heart of Capital City, and I can see the rising spires of the palace from here. That’s not so great, since surveillance is heavier here. I lead my little group down the first alley that isn’t a dead-end, and we begin the long journey back to our ‘home’.

Tiph lengthens her stride so she is walking beside me. It isn’t hard for her: she is taller than me already and my knee has begun to bother me. I am not limping yet, but it’s only a matter of time. I don’t try to outpace her. She glances at Nige and Raspy and looks like she wants to say something. I let her stew, because she is beginning to look like an adult, so she has to start learning how to assert herself like one. After a few minutes, she says (quietly) “we got a few cash cards: should we stop to buy food?”

I shake my head. In two weeks Examination season starts, and we will need the money to pay for bills of health. Even in the least governed parts of the city, you need to have a bill of health showing you are still healthy enough to live with the general population: no one will sell or buy from you without one. The air pollution gets in your system, and parts of you start to break down. The older you get, the worse it is, until eventually you become contagious with a viral form of the Spoiling that spreads from your breath. When that happens, NatMed ships you off to a colony for the Spoiled (or they kill you: they say they ship you off, but who really knows). Anyway, we will need as much cash as we can glean if we are going to pay for nine bills of health, and we don’t really have any other option.

Tiph knows all this, as do all the others. Unlike the others, she knows I must be nearing the end of my spoiling. She has been with me the longest, and has seen what happens to other people my age: any year now, I will go to get examined and I will fail the tests. They will ship me away (or kill me) straight from the testing zone, so that will be the last time the Muffins see me. Tiph also knows I have been slowly making sure she knows everything I do, and that the others know to follow her almost more than me. After my last testing, she will be all they have. She has been, in her own subversive way, trying to suggest that I skip the next examination.

“We all have to pay for the bills, Tiph,” I say. “You know there’s no other choice.”

Her face is frowny. She starts to say something else, and I make sure she sees me glance at a camera. It’s not safe to speak here. She shuts her mouth, but I know she’ll continue this conversation as soon as she gets the chance.

We are almost back to our home turf, 20 or so messy blocks from where we sack up. The boys recognize where we are and begin to pick on each other in a jovial way. Tiph squints at the way ahead of us. “Is that a body?” she asks, pointing. I look, but I really can’t see anything. (The spoiling affects all of us differently, and it has been taking my eyesight for years. I have a couple growing blind spots and I am almost blind in dim lighting. It sucks.) I squint, as if that will help, and I hobble closer. (Yes, I am limping now. Another joy of the spoiling: My left leg is going bad from the knee out.)

As we near it, I see that yes, it is a body. I bend down, and while it smells bad, it isn’t a dead sort of smell. I rummage around until I find an arm and follow it to a wrist. The limb is cold, but so am I and I need a pulse to tell if they are dead. I find it: they are alive. “Help me flip them over,” I say. The Muffins roll the body over and we see it is a young man, my age, or maybe a little older. He has red hair and is wearing some seriously stained clothes that look like they were farmer’s work clothes. He has a huge gash over his right eye, probably why he’s out here cold on the cobblestones. I groan internally.

I wish I could leave him here. I really do. But if I leave him here, I will be wondering if he made it for the rest of my life, and I don’t care about strangers enough to expend that sort of energy. Also, the three Muffins are watching me wide-eyed. “Help me get him on my back,” I say. I am going to have to carry this sorry bastard the rest of the way. They help me get him on me piggy-back style, and we tie him on with my sorry thin coat. We start off again, and I am moving even slower than before. I am not very big, strong for my size, but my leg is hating me. Nige and Raspy skip ahead and Tiph keeps pace with me, looking worried.

“Are you gonna make it carrying him like that?” She demands. Cheeky kid.

“I’ll make it,” I even manage not to pant. “I’m not going to be much help at grabbing dinner though: can you wrangle those two and manage it?” I know she can, but she needs to know it too. She nods, and rushes ahead to rally the boys. They head off to a side way that leads to a market, and I know they will steal dinner and not get caught. I focus on getting the rest of the way to our digs, the stranger heavy on my back.

A/n: I have so many almost-books I have been working on since I was little. This one is my favorite and has gone through so many revisions over the years to get here. Comment and tell me what you think!